mazumdar

Dear HN,

I need your help.

I've been working on creating an athletic apparel brand this whole year. Most of my time was spent behind product development and after finishing a close-to-final prototype, I started planning a kick-starter campaign to raise funding for the first production.

Problem is, the video we made for the campaign did not turn out great. After receiving initial feedback on the video, I have concluded that it is not good enough - it doesn't do justice to the product. So, despite having very little runway (I quit my job 2 months ago with 2 months of runway to pursue this venture), I have decided to make a brand new video.

I need your help in shaping the story of the new one.

If I could get some feedback on what works for you in the existing video and what doesn't, it would vastly help me determine the focus of the new one. To express my gratitude for your time, I'll give you a lifetime discount when the brand is launched. Just send me an email and tell me you're from the HN community (email in profile). ANY feedback is welcome and appreciated. Thanks so much!

existing video: http://preview.yathletics.com

previous HN post: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=6213871

I'm building an athletic apparel brand for men. I started working on the idea 8 months ago and am now launching the first product on kick-starter. I'm confident about the superiority of the product after getting validation from many potential customers, but I would love to get some feedback on the kickstarter video I made. Provided that I'm able to reach out to a large audience, do you think I can exceed my kickstarter goal with this video, or do you think i should make a new one at the cost of launching on kickstarter later? Thanks!

http://preview.yathletics.com