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Very soon I will start sending (cold) emails to potential clients to introduce my product.<p>I was looking for templates, but they all sound very mechanical and business-ish.<p>I would have love to make this template myself, so it properly expresses my intention, but I feel like my ability of expression in writing is a bit limited.<p>Does anyone know of a good template (which speaks as one human to another) that I can use for email introductions of my product ?<p>It probably does not matter, but the product is a social/peer learning product for software organizations.<p>Thanks for your help.

I have been experimenting with Do-It-Yourself learning. This year I thought of actually doing a self-study masters in Computer Science and understand if it is possible for someone to be able to do a DIY masters, to gain knowledge and build credentials.

If successful I am also hoping that my experiment will demonstrate a process which can be used by self learners.

What do you think of this experiment, and the process? Can you suggest any changes in either?

Here is the main page where I am consolidating everything.

http://opencs.wikidot.com