Monzo Writing Principles (opens in new tab)

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1 points47thpresident1y ago2 comments

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Just some feedback on your landing page.

I have no idea what problem you're targeting, what your product is, or how I would use it.

Hit those three targets without someone scrolling below the fold.

This isn't a product landing page, nor am I affiliated with Monzo. It is a company policy page showing effective principles to communicate with customers.

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calrain1y ago

Just some feedback on your landing page.

I have no idea what problem you're targeting, what your product is, or how I would use it.

Hit those three targets without someone scrolling below the fold.

47thpresidentOP1y ago

This isn't a product landing page, nor am I affiliated with Monzo. It is a company policy page showing effective principles to communicate with customers.

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