My approach would be more like this:

Pitch : "Continous page speed monitoring."

Call-to-Action: "Slow page loads lose business"

Explain-fix(es): "FastMonitor showed me which images were too big"

Explain-fix(es): "find a tricky intermittent problem "

I would explain these basic points within the initial viewport (without requiring scrolling), then if you scroll down you can explain the charts and whatnot. Also small-caps can make headers look sharp.

Also good luck and I wish you the best.