Lol :-) I didn't say umms are bad. I said cutting them out can be good. If you're looking to improve then that's one something (one of many) you might seek to address.
Another might be how you make a statement. The one you made here is positional. It's positional in that I feel you're trying to push me into telling you you're right.
I may well be wrong, but that's what I feel when I read your comment above.
So another something one might improve, in addition to eliminating umms, is to move from a positional stance to a principled stance. [START Starship Trooper voice] Would you like to know more?[END Starship Trooper voice] :-)