What you’re sharing looks interesting, but
how you’re sharing could be improved. You keep mentioning how a link “is really cool” or you “really liked it” instead of explaining what it is.
It’s your curation newsletter, so it’s implicit that whatever you’re sharing you found to be interesting. There’s no need to keep repeating it, especially not at the expense of context. Give us an idea of what a project is without making us click it. The brevity is a feature but it’s being wasted on a lack of information.
Finally, there should always be a link to a source, such as where to buy the Townscaper game or where you’ve learned about the Harry Potter series. Ideally to a website which isn’t filled with ads and dark patterns.
Please take all that as constructive criticism. You’re just starting out and seem to be on an interesting path, I’d like to see the newsletter become better.
