If I understood your explanation and schema correctly, a mutation itself is balanced, and if you have a transaction that involves three accounts, that would be split up into two balanced mutations, right?
The advantage I see with this design is that a mutation (and thus a transaction) is always balanced (you store the amount only once, and credit account and a debit account).
The disadvantages seem to be that the transaction itself doesn't explicitly list the total changes to an account explicitly, and that for each account you have to join the mutations twice (once for the credit side, once for the debit side) to get to re-calculate the current amount.
Storing both the current balance in the account means you cannot have concurrent updates to one account, so you must rely on row-level locking for consistency. (Which sounds a bit like a potential bottleneck, if you have something like a company-wide Cash account that is involved in lots of transactions, as in the ModernTreasury blog post).
Does that seem like a fair summary to you? Are there other trade-offs you have noticed?