I was disappointed that it's taken this long for you to respond. We're all busy, but I've taken time to give you a critique, and I thought you'd be checking back for responses. It's not too late for me to engage further because now I really do have other things to do.
Not sure that you'd want much more from me anyway - I expect you're feeling a bit battered. For that I apologise, but I didn't have time to be more diplomatic.
Good luck.