There's enough nuance required here to fill a small series of books. If you state the obvious and then go on to actually examine the nuance, then I'm fine giving you credit. If you don't then I don't really see the benefit.
Worse, you've given people a thought terminating cliche that can be disastrous in the hands of a novice. "Hey, we're focusing on the outcomes!" Yeah, but you've missed three milestone dates so your funding is going to be pulled and everyone is now unemployed.