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0 pointsakkartik15y ago0 comments

I got more out of this comment than the original website. You should just say this in the first paragraph even before you refer to 'the paper'.

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sukhbir15y ago· 1 in thread

Right, thanks for the feedback. I have updated it to better reflect the idea.

akkartikOP15y ago

Yeah, that works great.

sukhbir15y ago· 1 in thread

The 'Idea' page mentions this clearly. The third line in fact.

akkartikOP15y ago

Between a reader and that 'third line' lie 5 lines, a click, and 8 more lines. Put the punchline first, it'll keep the reader reading longer.

It's a good idea; I just want more people to get it before they hit the back button.

j / k navigate · click thread line to collapse