Ask HN: What suggestion you can give me to improve my article?

1 pointsImmortal3335y ago2 comments

Hi, HN I have started writing a blog with my friends. I would like you to give some suggestions to improve our blog's quality such that It can be helpful to others.

First article: https://hackeregg.github.io/2020/06/03/Implementing-a-Simple-Redirection-Analytics.html

Any constructive criticism is welcomed.

2 comments

271828182845y ago

I didn't read the entire blog post, but from the first few lines I can tell that English is not your native language. It is pretty good, but there are enough mistakes that it stands out.

Immortal333OP5y ago

Yes, English is not my native language. I think I can tell someone to proofread it and correct my mistakes. Thanks for your feedback.

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