It's more telling and announcing _to_ outside contributors, rather than asking, listening, discussing, and including them - two way communication This is think was the main complaint, so I was surprised to see it left unmentioned.
Sure, but I imagine that they're going to tell to outside contributors how they're going to improve their asking, listening, discussing and inclusion :)
Of course, that's why I said I think. Indeed, it did not happen today, my guess (again) would be to get this out the door and not make this post too broad.