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0 pointsqwertyuiop9249y ago0 comments

Good point. So reorganize the page a bit?

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I don't know, honestly I left the page baffled as to what it even is. (I got a better idea from a link to the demo posted here on HN.)

It could benefit from focusing on:

1. Why is this thing for me? 2. What is this thing and how does it address #1?

Both of those, if possible, should be answered in 1-3 short sentences, above the fold.

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0 pointsqwertyuiop9249y ago0 comments

Good point. So reorganize the page a bit?

I don't know, honestly I left the page baffled as to what it even is. (I got a better idea from a link to the demo posted here on HN.)

It could benefit from focusing on:

1. Why is this thing for me? 2. What is this thing and how does it address #1?

Both of those, if possible, should be answered in 1-3 short sentences, above the fold.

j / k navigate · click thread line to collapse