There's nothing especially derisive in my assessment. I don't think the content is bad, just boring. I also think it's too technical for a non-specialist audience.
> Maybe you can do better as well?
My first criticism is that generative models are not something specific to neural nets but that's not obvious from the article.
My second criticism is that their explanations are overly mechanical. In the case of DCGAN the article begins by talking about parameters and magic numbers; i.e. they explain how the thing works rather than what it does, at an intuitive level.
Clear enough?