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- Linemetrics has been doing this sort of thing for industry for a little while, though more around energy usage. https://www.linemetrics.com/de/ If you already have a paying / letter of intent client for your system, you should have that front and center in your application.
- Where does the AI part come in? Those seem like fairly straightforward monitoring applications. What you wrote suggests that you would be able to tell customers what they should do about the anomalies/waste you detect, how do you plan to do that?
- Which of the industries you mentioned do you want to go after first?